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[-] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 3 points 2 months ago

This is two panels too long, imo.

Change the first panel’s text to “Forgive me, Helen, I’ve changed!”, the second’s to “Have you, Theseus?”, and you’re done, lol.

[-] Zozano@aussie.zone 1 points 2 months ago* (last edited 2 months ago)

Why stop there? Make it one panel with stacked speech bubbles.

[-] damnedfurry@lemmy.world 1 points 2 months ago

The punchline should be on its own panel to create a natural temporal gap between it and the setup, for the reader. :)

[-] idunnololz@lemmy.world 1 points 2 months ago

insert joke of Theseus here

Please clap.

[-] x00z@lemmy.world 1 points 2 months ago

I needed the little punchline in panel 3 to remember it.

this post was submitted on 13 Oct 2025
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