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this post was submitted on 07 Sep 2023
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Not taking away from her stunning writing, but this shorter version wouldn’t be wrong either.
Her wording is more powerful and less ad hominem, exactly how such a letter should be written.
edit: I think I understand what you are saying, and you're not wrong, either.
probably would suffice