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Haspil resigned a year later but continued to steal money, even after Saleh discovered the theft and let Haspil repay him over two years to avoid criminal prosecution.
Well that didn't work out.
Yeah dont make deals with people that fucked with you to that degree. Pretty wild to me. Maybe the boss had some secrets of his own and didnt wanna go to the cops. But either way pretty sad.
Prosecutors said Haspil had been hired as an assistant for Saleh, whose ventures included a ride-hailing motorcycle startup in Nigeria, but quickly began to siphon money from Saleh’s businesses.
That's a painfully clumsy sentence. Has AP no editors?
What do you think the line should be?
Replace the , but with a .
Start a new sentence.
Show me
Prosecutors said Haspil had been hired as an assistant for Saleh, whose ventures included a ride-hailing motorcycle startup in Nigeria. Haspil quickly began to siphon money from Saleh’s businesses.
Finally readable.
I often take issues with "headline English", but that sentence reads perfectly fine to me.
There's nothing wrong with the original copy, this guy just has a millisecond attention span.
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