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[-] MadBob@feddit.nl -1 points 1 month ago

Could've been better without the fourth panel, I feel.

[-] pyre@lemmy.world 0 points 1 month ago

shift 1,2,3 to 2,3,4 and have 1 as an establishing shot of the nsa hq to make the setup clearer. right now it's like you see the punchline, then an extra panel, then go back to see what was the big deal and realize somewhere in the background it says nsa hq.

[-] MadBob@feddit.nl 2 points 1 month ago

Well I did see the "NSA Headquarters" sign but I admit it'd be weird to have that on the wall in the office of the madam who might want to see things!

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