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Anon finds a plot hole (sh.itjust.works)

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[-] sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works 15 points 2 months ago

Eh, I think it's pretty well-written. It hits all the important parts of a good kids novel series:

fun to read
few immediately obvious plot holes (that a 10yo would notice)
easy for a child to imagine that they're in that world

We need more series like Harry Potter with high engagement that also promote creativity.

this post was submitted on 31 Jul 2024

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