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[-] NoneOfUrBusiness@fedia.io 3 points 3 days ago

Okay as someone who used to have this exact problem in the past, you should learn to avoid run on sentences and comma splices. Using relative clauses to join sentences also makes things ten times harder to understand. As a rule of thumb if you have more than three commas in one sentence there you should probably put down a period somewhere and start a new sentence.

[-] shinigamiookamiryuu@lemm.ee 1 points 3 days ago

Where even is it in this case?

[-] NoneOfUrBusiness@fedia.io 3 points 3 days ago

Count the number of commas per period in your response in the OP.

[-] shinigamiookamiryuu@lemm.ee 1 points 3 days ago

You say that like that's a comma splice though. I just packed an actual non-run-on sentence in the case of both sentences.

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