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this post was submitted on 22 Nov 2024
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This reads fine? It could use some commas but otherwise makes sense
where would commas go to make it make sense? 🤔
Alright, it needs some other punctuation, too, but that's not so bad.
I'm raising my kids by "if you have anything nice to say, say it" and "if you have anything nice you can do, do it".
i read it twice and somehow didn't notice the word "do" appears twice 🤡
Lmao that'll do it!
And demonstrates why OP coulda used some punctuation
That'll do do it!