Good effort! I'd suggest you start with thinner washes, let it dry, and build it gradually in intensity, using different colors in it too (a bush is not just green, for example). What kind of paper and paints are you using? In watercolor, the quality of your art supplies play a big role, more so than in any other medium (due to its transparency, it needs to behave well in thin washes).
Thanks for the advice. What do you mean by thinner washes? I’m actually not following any tutorials, but rather figuring this on my own, so I don’t know any jargons I’m afraid. I’m using 200 gsm a6 watercolor sheets, and some low quality watercolor brush pens. I’m rubbing the paint on a clear watercolor brush pen and painting it with that. I mostly don’t use the color pens by themselves on paper.
Ah, that explains that look you got. It's best to start with actual watercolors, and not brush pens. These brush pens don't allow you to use them in a thinner (watery) consistency, which will allow you to build nice-looking layers. By the time you have layed the color on paper, it goes inside the paper and it doesn't create a nice looking "wash" (spread of the pigment). The brush pens are more interesting to be used in specific kinds of illustrations, rather than traditional watercolor. Also, 200gsm is a bit thin for watercolors.
I'd highly suggest you get 300gsm paper (I'd suggest Meeden 10X7" Cotton Watercolor Paper, $21), watercolor "round" brushes at various sizes ($10 for a set), and a set of good watercolors. I'd suggest the MeiLiang Watercolor Paint Set for $21 (best quality for the price). The look you will get from these will be much different than the brush pens, and will be a lot more versatile.
I'd suggest you start with this tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tDdfPMTX15Y and then continue with these ones: https://www.youtube.com/@Nianiani/videos Feel free to message me or email me directly if you like some more help!
Watercolor / Watercolour / Aquarelle Painting
A place for all things watercolor painting. Submit your paintings, give / receive critiques. Post resources such as tutorials, ask questions, learn about and the art of watercolor!
If posting another person's work, please try and credit them. Don't take credit for another's work.
If posting your own, you can if you wish use [OC] for original content. This is not required.
Enjoy the wonderful world of watercolour painting.
Other communities you might like:
Feel free to add us if you moderate a similar community.