Actually really enjoyed the writing minus the last 25 minutes. It's quippy and fun and pretty cruel and gross out in places. Really solid.
The effects are laughable. I really appreciate them going "we are in the middle of nowhere and we need to find a house and a phone" while you can literally see the nice house they were shooting in front of just behind them in the tree line.
Man if they had cleaned up the opening sequence a bit. Canned the second climax and just gave us a long expositional epilogue it would have literally been a near comic perfect HellBoy.
All in all a really fun hour long YouTube worthy fan film.