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[-] Diddlydee@feddit.uk 49 points 2 months ago

I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn't notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.

[-] LostXOR@fedia.io 15 points 2 months ago

Maybe there's none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?

[-] mortemtyrannis@lemmy.ml 4 points 2 months ago

Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.

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