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[-] x00z@lemmy.world 1 points 51 minutes ago

God I skipped a beat.

[-] Doom@ttrpg.network 2 points 2 hours ago

this is based on something can't remember what but it is

[-] sugar_in_your_tea@sh.itjust.works 4 points 2 hours ago

There are a bunch of creepy pastas along that line, it's a pretty tired trope.

[-] Decency8401@discuss.tchncs.de 4 points 4 hours ago

This just gave me chills

[-] Empricorn@feddit.nl 23 points 6 hours ago* (last edited 5 hours ago)

I want this to work as a NoSleep creepypasta or whatever, but it just makes no sense. I have never, in my life, thought any window could possibly be a painting.

EDIT: I just thought of Mario 64. That's an exception!

[-] janus2@lemmy.zip 3 points 5 hours ago

it would work better as a fairytale, has more of that kinda vibe

[-] Scott_of_the_Arctic@lemmy.world 45 points 9 hours ago

Would be worse to wake up and see your own portrait added to the wall.

[-] HyperCube@fedia.io 95 points 19 hours ago

Seem to recall this story from r/nosleep a long time ago. That's one of the things I still haven't replaced from my reddit days, I liked reading through the top stories every once in a while. There really were some gems. I just got an AO3 account so maybe I can find something like that again, but I'm not too familiar with the site.

[-] Atlas_@lemmy.world 4 points 8 hours ago

I remember M59gar in particular wrote some bangers there. That whole portal in the first series was 👨‍🍳😚

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 63 points 19 hours ago

Seems like the story predates /r/nosleep by a fair bit. Relatedly, I wish lemmy were more open to creative writing. The greentext communities respond positively, but it’s a gamble anywhere else. Over the years, It’s become apparent to me that lemmy is full of philistines.

[-] toynbee@lemmy.world 2 points 7 hours ago

I'm pretty sure I read this story in a book of urban legends when I was a kid in the nineties and it wasn't new then.

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 3 points 8 hours ago* (last edited 8 hours ago)

lemmy is full of philistines.

Reddit, too. The fandoms I was engaged in there seem totally uninterested in (or even hostile to) fanfiction or even lore speculation now. No, just repeating and worshipping the same shallow memes.

At risk of sounding old... it wasn't always like that.

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 3 points 8 hours ago

At risk of doing the same, kids these days have shorter attention spans and more expendable entertainment within their grasp. I can’t say I’ve ever interacted with fanfiction communities, but, from what I’ve seen elsewhere, creativity is perceived as “yapping.” Which is heartbreaking to me.

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 2 points 8 hours ago* (last edited 8 hours ago)

That's my observation, too. shakes "get off my lawn" fist.

But Ao3 has good apps now. That's kinda recent, so maybe there will be some fresh blood from smartphone-primaries, especially as Reddit fandom subs bleed users (like me).

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 1 points 7 hours ago

I hope so too. Writing should be timeless. Without a space for it in the modern internet, where apparently all creativity is meant to be placed, according to my niece, fewer writers will flourish. We live in an age of change, and I’m constantly bouncing back and forth between happy and terrified of what that means

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 2 points 7 hours ago* (last edited 7 hours ago)

Another personal anecdote: I am writing a fandom fic now (and finished another). I get some foot traffic, even likes/bookmarks, but barely any feedback or comments. I really have no idea what readers think, aside from like one commenter on the old fic.

Based on what I've read in other communities, that's a common phenomenon. There's just less engagement proportional to the (also lesser) reader count these days, and it kinda feels like writing into a black hole.

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 2 points 7 hours ago

I shifted my mindset to get around any issues. I don’t write for anyone else. I write for an audience of one, me. I find myself interesting, however vain that might sound, and therefore I write. I don’t know how much that helps you, if you’re looking for constructive criticism, but it’s the only way I’ve managed to continue enjoying the act. Well, that and passing it along to the kids in the form of verbal collaborative storytelling.

[-] proceduralnightshade@lemmy.ml 9 points 15 hours ago

a gamble anywhere else

Are there even any communities related to creative writing anywhere on lemmy? Never stumbled upon any

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 5 points 10 hours ago

!2sentence2horror@lemmy.blahaj.zone, a few !twosentencehorror communities, a poetry community I’ve lost track of, and a smattering of niche writing communities like this one. The tumblr communities as well, if you count surreptitious fiction, which I do. None that are dedicated to writing are very active

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 1 points 8 hours ago

Alternatively, expand another?

I mean zero offense, but I feel like Lemmy is too fragmented, and most communities need more population, not another more-specific shard of a similar thing.

[-] daggermoon@lemmy.world 10 points 17 hours ago

If you wrote something I'd read it.

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 3 points 7 hours ago

Squints Oh, wait, you're one of the CachyOS devs! Right?

I'm typing from CachyOS now, love everything y'all do. Though I might get in the community (or matrix chat) to spout a left-field suggestion.

[-] daggermoon@lemmy.world 2 points 5 hours ago

Me? No. I just use it lol.

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 1 points 5 hours ago

Ah, my mistake. I just vaguely remember your handle from some CachyOS space awhile ago.

[-] daggermoon@lemmy.world 1 points 5 hours ago

I'm a mod on the Lemmy community. That's probably where.

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 1 points 8 hours ago

Heh, what fandoms?

[-] Gullible@sh.itjust.works 2 points 10 hours ago

You’ve been here for a few months. In all likelihood, you have! Though nothing particularly long and nothing particularly good.

[-] shneancy@lemmy.world 10 points 16 hours ago

oh it's ancient. i remember reading a Polish translation of that back in 2013 or something just as i was starting to get into creepypastas

[-] brucethemoose@lemmy.world 4 points 17 hours ago

Ao3 is epic, but it’s very fandom specific. There is a “general” story section I guess, but TBH I have not ventured there.

[-] TabbsTheBat@pawb.social 97 points 20 hours ago

An old but good one :3.. 4chan has some pretty good horror on it funnily enough.. as long as you can be bothered sifting through the toxic waste that the rest of the platform is

[-] spooky2092@lemmy.blahaj.zone 16 points 12 hours ago

That's why I subscribe to greentext communities, cuz I did my time in the trenches dealing with the Nazis and gore well before the right well and truly lost (what little was left of) their goddamned minds.

[-] DefectiveFoundation@lemmy.world 6 points 10 hours ago

4vhan was pretty left leaning with some libertarian (and still rampant racism). It was also, by far, the easiest social media to manipulate.

[-] spooky2092@lemmy.blahaj.zone 2 points 10 hours ago

When were you on there? Because I was on there for a good few years in the late 00s up until gamergate, and the Nazi posting was mainly on /b/, but it wasn't absent from other boards and only got worse as people stopped ironically Nazi posting and were more serious about it

[-] spacecadet@lemm.ee 4 points 11 hours ago

You fought in the trenches against the Nazis? You must be over 100 years old!

[-] Diddlydee@feddit.uk 44 points 19 hours ago

I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn't notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.

[-] mortemtyrannis@lemmy.ml 2 points 1 hour ago

Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.

[-] LostXOR@fedia.io 14 points 13 hours ago

Maybe there's none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?

[-] MrJameGumb@lemmy.world 55 points 20 hours ago
[-] Sanctus@lemmy.world 39 points 21 hours ago

Anon, what the fuck

[-] Nurse_Robot@lemmy.world 21 points 20 hours ago

Very relatable

[-] SurfinBird@lemmy.ca 15 points 20 hours ago

Are you gonna start dogging or what mate?

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