I'm taking in the rest of what you've said

I'm sorry that I'm not better at being succinct. I'm sure another person could have conveyed the same arguments in not quite as many paragraphs . . .

but I do want to clarify that when I described making people feel whole, I was talking about the main victim. Not appeasing their family

My bad here too, I definitely misread it at least partially. I'm sure it won't surprise you to know that it doesn't change the substance of what I would say all that much, but I still should have been more careful to represent what you said accurately.