Maybe I'm just good at noticing pedantic shit, but I skimmed for 4 seconds and immediately saw these idiots made a typo with a double (or triple?) space. Which is something any basic typing software would highlight with a blue underline. Or if they had a single person under 65 proofread it

I mean cmon it's an official government bill, how are you already making mistakes in the first paragraph of the front page summary. It's glaringly obvious when you get to the sentence