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this post was submitted on 29 Mar 2024
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i refuse to believe that this is anything but the highest concept and most dedicated of bits
every note is perfect by itself but also builds on every note before it.
I, as an author, desire to capture a sense of escalating tension while both increasing jargon and maintaining low stakes. Like if Toy Story were a slice of life. I have fallen flat on my face imagining something this person does so effortlessly
ever watch fawlty towers?
No, but from a cursory glance at Wikipedia, I'd give it a shot. It could be some much needed inspiration
escalating tension while maintaining low stakes is like cleese's whole ouevre
so all that racist shit about migrants in London is just a bit huh, increasing tension, lowstakes