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[-] ClimateChangeAnxiety@hexbear.net 8 points 6 hours ago

I agree that cars get given cop voice, but this particular example I’m not sure how you could reword that sentence. I think I would say “train derails after striking x” regardless of what the object was.

Train derails after striking cow escaped from pasture. Train derails after striking fallen log.

[-] sexywheat@hexbear.net 20 points 5 hours ago

How about “negligent driver causes trail derailment”

[-] ThermonuclearEgg@hexbear.net 28 points 6 hours ago

Active voice first.

"A car on the train tracks caused an East LA Metro train to derail"

[-] RNAi@hexbear.net 13 points 6 hours ago

I like hearing the important part first, here being "train derails"

[-] ThermonuclearEgg@hexbear.net 14 points 6 hours ago

Fair enough but establishing a causative form is critical here. As written, the train is to blame for striking the car in the same way a car is to blame for striking the pedestrian.

[-] Orcocracy@hexbear.net 19 points 6 hours ago

Train derailed by wayward car on tracks

[-] RNAi@hexbear.net 15 points 6 hours ago* (last edited 6 hours ago)

Train derails due to car crossing a red light

Car crossing red light causes train derailment

[-] buckykat@hexbear.net 6 points 5 hours ago

Driver derails train with foolish and careless driving

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