I should have said “in my opinion”. The final line just seems too much, maybe it works better as a comic strip? The “looks at daughter” seems necessary, but makes the punchline longer.
You shouldn't have pointed it out at all. Now we have to come up with a better punchline.
Like: " Sorry kid, the bank does that"
I should have said “in my opinion”. The final line just seems too much, maybe it works better as a comic strip? The “looks at daughter” seems necessary, but makes the punchline longer.
You shouldn't have pointed it out at all. Now we have to come up with a better punchline.
Like: " Sorry kid, the bank does that"