I mean obviously it will write good, shifting it towards people with higher education etc. But not sure where the male part comes from.

Also, bad choice of lines for 3.5 and 4. Why not dotted and dashed or something?

"But even then, the suggestions that these models will make may not be well aligned with the values, the sort of linguistic style, that would be an authentic expression of those students.

Uh... an essay should be about arguments etc., not linguistic style?