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[-] spittingimage@lemmy.world 90 points 7 months ago

You're looking for opinions? I got opinions.

  • The Chosen One who gets dragged around like a sack of potatoes until they Come Into Their Own and go on to Turn The Tide.

  • The Wise Yet Enigmatic Sage.

  • The Sharp-Tongued Princess.

  • The Rogue With A Heart of Gold.

  • Plots based on misunderstanding ancient prophecies that are so vaguely written they could be cookie recipes.

  • Gods that slot into neat roles on a godly table of elements.

  • Magic systems so detailed and prosaic you may as well call them technology.

  • Elves that are exactly like every other elf character you've ever read about except for one glaring but superficial difference which is there to make you think the author's not plagiarising their own favourite author.

[-] Granite@kbin.social 46 points 7 months ago

Now I want to read a fantasy comedy where someone trying to make cookies from an ancient recipe is whisked off on an adventure to fulfill the prophecy, but they just want snickerdoodles dammit.

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[-] Frozengyro@lemmy.world 23 points 7 months ago

Me reading the wheel of time:

  • The Chosen One ✓ the main male characters, but definitely Rand

  • The Wise Yet Enigmatic Sage ✓Moiraine

  • The Sharp-Tongued Princess. ✓Nynaeve

  • The Rogue With A Heart of Gold. ✓Mat

  • Plots based on misunderstanding ancient prophecies that are so vaguely written they could be cookie recipes. ✓All the prophecies

  • Gods that slot into neat roles on a godly table of elements. ✓The forsaken all having distinct methods to get to the top

  • Magic systems so detailed and prosaic you may as well call them technology. ✓The one power

  • Elves ✓Warders

All that said, I'm still enjoying the series thus far.

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[-] WeLoveCastingSpellz@lemmy.dbzer0.com 19 points 7 months ago

I think ypu just don't like wheel of time lmao

[-] simple@lemm.ee 14 points 7 months ago

Elves that are exactly like every other elf character you’ve ever read about except for one glaring but superficial difference which is there to make you think the author’s not plagiarising their own favourite author.

For real. There has to be a better use of elves other than "they live in the woods and appreciate nature and hate dark elves or night elves or whatever your story calls them"

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[-] snooggums@midwest.social 11 points 7 months ago

The Chosen One who gets dragged around like a sack of potatoes until they Come Into Their Own and go on to Turn The Tide.

The Wise Yet Enigmatic Sage.

The Sharp-Tongued Princess.

The Rogue With A Heart of Gold.

I was expecting a joke about Star Wars: A New Hope later in the post!

Yeah, those have all been done to death in novels and I'm sick of the reluctant chosen one the most.

[-] Couldbealeotard@lemmy.world 9 points 7 months ago

You may as well be describing The Matrix.

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[-] Remmock@kbin.social 86 points 7 months ago

So far I’ve discovered in this thread:

-People don’t like traditional fantasy that takes itself seriously.
-People don’t like lighthearted fantasy that plays with the themes.
-People don’t like hard magical systems.
-People don’t like soft magical systems.
-People don’t like dragons being involved.
-People don’t like an absence of dragons.
-People don’t like character archetypes.
-People don’t like counterarchetypes.
-People don’t like when characters speak an understandable language.
-People don’t like characters meeting each other in common social meeting areas.

All good here? Great.

Just write whatever the fuck you want. There’s always an audience.

[-] Cryophilia@lemmy.world 13 points 7 months ago

That's just lemmy being too god damn stupid to differentiate between "this is my preference" and "this is bad", as usual.

"I don't like dragons": preference.

"I don't like Mary Sue characters": bad writing.

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[-] simple@lemm.ee 62 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

Zero consistency to magic systems. I get it, having all sorts of spells in the story is fun and gives a lot of creative ways to make fights more interesting, but...

  • If teleportation magic exists, why don't people who own it teleport everywhere?

  • If time travel magic exists, why isn't everyone doing everything in their power to get it and use it? Looking at you, harry potter.

  • The villains usually have spells that are supposed to be ultra powerful and can kill anyone quickly but somehow it doesn't work against main characters and there's no excuse for why fights drag on for so long. Imagine seeing the villain introduced by vaporizing someone but never seeing them do it again.

  • Main character(s) breaking the rules of magic just because...

I'm a fan of stories like Avatar the last airbender or Witch Hat Atelier because their magic is very consistent. It makes things way more interesting when a character can't just pull something out of their ass to save them in the middle of a fight.

Shoutout to every story that alludes to the fact that mages can run out of mana but is insanely inconsistent how and when it happens. Sometimes they spam spells for hours and sometimes it's just "Oh no, I can't use [spell] anymore because... Um... The plot says I can't!"

[-] K3zi4@lemmy.world 11 points 7 months ago

One of the things I enjoy most about Sanderson's work is his attention to detail in his numerous magic systems.

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More than 17 apostrophes on the first page with every name of a person, place, or thing having one.

[-] flubba86@lemmy.world 39 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

Ah yes, H'taln'k from J'briom-4, flying his Zal't M'lort class Winger to the Mont Bronl'n port with the day's haul of Sea Crom't. Oh won't his mabs'k be pleased with this delivery.

[-] rovingnothing29@lemmy.world 13 points 7 months ago

Chill, not all of us speak Klingon

Today is a good day to learn.

[-] PM_Your_Nudes_Please@lemmy.world 13 points 7 months ago

I remember seeing some sort of graph, where the number of made up words on the first page of a fantasy novel can be charted to a skewed bell curve of that novel’s average rating. One or two made up words tends to boost ratings slightly, but more than that and the ratings quickly decline. Because if an author is immediately dependent on introducing new words as a crutch for worldbuilding, it doesn’t bode well for the rest of the book.

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[-] x4740N@lemmy.world 41 points 7 months ago

Treating wands like guns in fights instead of using spells creatively

[-] Hadriscus@lemm.ee 13 points 7 months ago

Oh yes....this is SO lazy. There's this immense potential for creative choreography that's left untapped. Directors should really consult dungeon masters for this kind of stuff

[-] Postmortal_Pop@lemmy.world 10 points 7 months ago

There's a meme floating around that suggests taking inspiration for wand using from conductors and I cannot stress how amazing every fight in Harry potter would have been if this was the standard.

[-] zkfcfbzr@lemmy.world 11 points 7 months ago

Bringing Harry Potter into this, the fact that they showed they do know how to do this, when Dumbledore and Voldemort fought in the 5th movie, makes it all the more annoying that almost every other fight in the series was just shooting blasts and energy beams at each other

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[-] Passerby6497@lemmy.world 35 points 7 months ago

I absolutely hate the trope where they start out with something interesting and have to do a flashback to the parts that led up to it. Like I just had that happen with a sequel to a book I was reading, and I'm really struggling to get started. I fucking hate the

*cold open to something dramatic happening*

Record scritch "I bet you're wondering how I got here. Well, it all started...."

bullshit trope and its really hard for me to look past some times.

[-] grasshopper_mouse@lemmy.world 24 points 7 months ago

I dunno if it's considered "bad", but I personally hate when one of the characters gets amnesia, or the group meets a character that has amnesia. It just feels like a laziness by the author who can't think of any other way to make a storyline interesting.

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[-] xkforce@lemmy.world 22 points 7 months ago

Women and girls usually end up in a relationship by the end of the story and/or are the ones needing to be rescued. Its formulaic, boring and sexist due to the comparative lack of the opposite occurring. eg. men needing to be rescued.

Like... even if you did not give a single shit about sexism, its the same tired plot points over and over again. It has Hallmark channel writer energy. Create a second plot I beg you.

[-] GregorGizeh@lemmy.zip 38 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

I agree with you on principle, but i feel it has reached a point where the circumvention of the classic tropes has created a new and also very formulaic stereotype: the “empowering“ woman. Must be strong, butch, evidently better than men in something typically associated with men, and if by any chance she is permitted to be classically feminine she must either be a lesbian or emotionally fucked up somehow. Bonus points for leather jacket and shades.

It is probably the better trope but i find it similarly boring at this point. Very performative and often with little relevance to the story being told.

[-] VelvetStorm@lemmy.world 10 points 7 months ago

They also can't have any scars on their face that could make them less attractive. Hester shaw from the predator city books had her fucking nose cut off and the scar also took off some her her top lip yet in the fucking dog shit movie they made she looks like this

[-] Nibodhika@lemmy.world 11 points 7 months ago

But that's not specific to women, a similar example is Tyrion Lannister in A Song of Ice and Fire https://metro.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2016/06/mg_got_tyrion.png

That has to do with Hollywood wanting actors to look pretty and with costs of keeping effects realistic and cost efficient even on close ups.

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[-] VelvetStorm@lemmy.world 21 points 7 months ago

Elves always being like the bottom rung of society or them being the outcasts. It's insane to think that elves wouldn't be the rulers of dam near any government or at the very least not be the power and influence behind a puppet government. Who wouldn't want the help of a race of people who, depending on the lore, can live for thousands of years.

I mean, there could be an elf that has been a friend of your family for like 5 or more generations. That sounds dope as fuck for us but kinda shitty for them.

[-] BestBouclettes@jlai.lu 25 points 7 months ago

I like what Tolkien did with the elves. They went from a warmongering bloodthirsty species to ancient and wise and they decided to gtfo and live on a secluded island out of reach from pretty much everyone.

[-] PM_Your_Nudes_Please@lemmy.world 9 points 7 months ago

Well there’s also the whole “The One Ring is the only thing still keeping the elves’ magic alive, so they know that destroying the One Ring will inevitably lead to the end of the elves” side of things. That’s why all the elves in LOTR are so fucking morbid about everything. The elves rely on magic, and while it did a lot of damage and was undoubtedly evil, the One Ring bound that magic to Middle Earth because it was the same magic Sauron used to appear in Middle Earth. So by helping to destroy the One Ring (and breaking Sauron’s tether to Middle Earth) they’re also destroying the only thing keeping their magic from drying up over time. They’re inadvertently starting a ticking time bomb for themselves.

At least, that’s what I remember off the top of my head. It could be completely wrong, but I’m too lazy to google it.

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[-] swordsmanluke@programming.dev 19 points 7 months ago

All things Deus Ex Machina. I get it, endings are hard. Climaxes are hard to write. But the payoff feels cheap as hell when your protagonist just "digs a little deeper" and suddenly finds just enough power to save the day. When it comes out of nowhere, it feels unearned by the hero and is not only unsatisfying, it's also a good way to give you hero power creep until there's nothing on earth that can believably challenge them. See: Superman.

[-] stoicmaverick@lemmy.world 9 points 7 months ago

I get what you're saying, and I agree, but I think Superman is a bad example. Superman is meant to be infinitely powerful (with only a few examples like kryptonite to aid in storytelling). It's a bit like the premise of One Punch Man. His story is meant to be about what one SHOULD do with infinite power, and the nature of morality, rather than overcoming adversity as with most superheroes.

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[-] Cyyy@lemmy.world 18 points 7 months ago

girls falling in love with the main character and wanting to stay with him for the rest of the story just because they have met random.

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[-] The_Overseer@sh.itjust.works 14 points 7 months ago

Its for the reader/watcher to decide what is canon it maybe good if done subtly but if its some important or core lore, well then i should've just imagined the whole thing why are you needed ?

[-] Wooster@startrek.website 12 points 7 months ago

This is specific to the videogame-ish sub-genre, mostly Isakeis…

But you go out of the way to include RPG mechanics into your story… but the only real influence it has on the storytelling is spending an inordinate amount of time grinding… a mechanic explicitly added to RPGs to pad the game.

There are good video game based stories, Survival Story of a Sword King and Dungeon Reset both immediately come to mind… but I feel like this is a widespread problem.

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[-] callouscomic@lemm.ee 12 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

Elves and Dwarves done like every other Elf and Dwarf. Especially when they go out of their way to give the Dwarf that overdone Irish/Scottish accent written out in damn near unreadable text.

Also when the worldbuilding and plot basically is "here's some not so thinly veiled racism between groups who will set that aside to fight a common enemy." Series ends on a high note, but you know this world will fall into disarray again cause people suck, so like, what was the point.

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[-] Orbituary@lemmy.world 12 points 7 months ago

You meet your party at the tavern...

[-] snooggums@midwest.social 14 points 7 months ago

A tavern is a perfect place to meet strangers. It is a social hangout where new things are bound to be found!

The problem is always starting an adventure by interacting with a mysterious stranger they have no reason to trust. Why isn't Aunt Elovynn sending them on their way from a family get together? Or the religious leader that the characters know and trust giving them a start?

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[-] HRDS_654@lemmy.world 11 points 7 months ago

Dragons are cool, but god am I sick of them. The worst part is they are either evil and directly attack people or good and completely missing for 90% of the story.

[-] SkaveRat@discuss.tchncs.de 10 points 7 months ago

Problem is, that they easily turn into the nuke equivalent in fantasy. It's challenging to incorporate them into a world where they are not completely OP

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[-] j4k3@lemmy.ml 11 points 7 months ago* (last edited 7 months ago)

I'm so sick of exceptionalism. Every damn thing seems to center around some shitty thinly veiled oligarch, their kids as some hero, or unhappenable origins and an impossible hero. Everything is geared towards cultural acceptance of some authoritarian neo feudal dystopian future.

Stories can be interesting in other spaces. We all exist within those real spaces. We can fantasize about better places and times within similar realities as our own. I view all this exceptionalism like collective narcissism. I can't tell if it is an universal writing bias or a publishing bias, but I don't like it.

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[-] owenfromcanada@lemmy.world 10 points 7 months ago

The Chosen One somehow discovering some new thing at the climax of any big conflict.

I'm looking at you, Sword of Truth.

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