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this post was submitted on 21 May 2025
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I love it, but I don't know much about organizing, so I can only offer small corrections. I know it's just a draft, but if you'd still like them:
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At the end of the second section, it should be:"Where one goes, we all go"
At the beginning of the next page, it should be:" ... we must be aware of who the real enemy is" and also the sentence is long and would benefit from being split up.
The section "What is my role" doesn't answer that question at all. I mean in the practical sense of what a union membership could actually entail: paying dues, voting if a strike should be called, striking, picketing, discussing working conditions with co-workers, helping with organizing, setting up meetings, connecting with other unions, etc. You could say that there are multiple roles in a union waiting to be filled. And that people can choose theirs based on their strengths.
"With the help of multiple organizations that have supported us in helping us achieve this endeavor...” should be shortened. For example: "With the help of multiple organizations that have supported us in this endeavor...” and even then the sentence that follows should still be shortened or split up.
This is a rephrased Qanon saying (WWG1WGA. I would avoid it entirely. The unionist phrase is 'an injury to one is an injury to all' (and probably what the Q crowd cribbed for their version)
Oh, yes, that's much better! I didn't know about the Qanon thing, just corrected the style, but I thought, something was off about that phrase.