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[-] agamemnonymous@sh.itjust.works 9 points 2 months ago

Aesthetically, I don't like ABBB for "Roses are red...". ABCB is fine, ABBB feels too forceful. And the plurals just turn it into half rhymes anyway. How about :

Roses are red

I used to have dreams

Work is a drag

But I guess I have memes

[-] isolatedscotch@discuss.tchncs.de 3 points 2 months ago

now it's just missing an ACAB rhyme scheme

[-] qarbone@lemmy.world 1 points 2 months ago

I used to have dreams

Work is a drag

But I guess I have memes

Roses are red

this post was submitted on 03 Jun 2025

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