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[-] Moss@hexbear.net 31 points 1 week ago

This is like someone trying to write in Disco Elysium's style but having none of the sauce that makes the writing good

[-] MizuTama@hexbear.net 24 points 1 week ago

The language has complexity but fails to be evocative. It reiterates itself with adjectives like tinny, followed by a quote about hollowness, a message the former already gives. It's prose that lacks faith in itself. It's words used accurately, without precision.

this post was submitted on 24 Jun 2025
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